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Story: Hearts and Hazards
Creating authentic, resonant romantic dialogue is about balancing genuine emotion with realism. It’s finding the extraordinary in the ordinary—how real people, with all their quirks and imperfections, express love and connection. This approach not only makes your romantic scenes more believable but also more impactful, allowing readers to see a bit of themselves in the characters’ experiences.
Crafting Dialogue
Crafting dialogue that rings true, engages readers, and drives the story forward is a skill that can always be honed. Here are two creative writing exercises designed to help beginning authors improve and refine their dialogue writing skills.
Exercise 1: The Dialogue Swap
Objective:To understand how dialogue reflects character personality and to practice creating distinct character voices.
Step 1: Write a Short Dialogue
Create a brief exchange (3-5 exchanges) between two characters in a specific scenario. Keep it simple—a disagreement, a decision to be made, or a secret revealed.
Step 2: Character Swap
Rewrite the dialogue, but swap the characters’ personalities. If the original had a cautious character and an impulsive character, switch their dialogue so the cautious character is now the impulsive one, and vice versa.
Step 3: Analyze and Reflect
Compare the two dialogues. How did the characters’ voices change with their personalities? What words or rhythms did you use to convey their unique perspectives? Reflect on how altering a character’s personality changes the dialogue’s dynamics and implications.
This exercise helps you explore how deeply character personality influences dialogue. It sharpens your ability to differentiate characters’ voices and makes you more adept at ensuring dialogue reflects character traits and relationships.
Exercise 2: Real-Life Eavesdropping
Objective:To capture natural dialogue rhythms and nuances, improving realism in written dialogue.
Step 1: Eavesdrop on Real Conversations
Stay with me. You don’t eavesdrop on people who you know. Spend some time in a public place—a café, a park, a mall—and listen to real conversations around you. Take notes on phrases, rhythms, and interactions that catch your attention. Pay attention to how people interrupt each other, use filler words, or change topics abruptly.
Step 2: Transcribe and Analyze
Without changing the content, transcribe a snippet of conversation as accurately as you can. Then, analyze it for patterns, natural speech rhythms, and how people actually convey information verbally.
Step 3: Incorporate into Your Work
Take a piece of dialogue from your current work-in-progress and revise it using insights gained from your real-life observations. Aim to inject more natural speech patterns, including pauses, interruptions, and nonverbal cues. Just don’t get carried away with pauses, erms, ums, uhs, etc.
This exercise trains you to pay attention to how people speak in real life, which is invaluable for writing realistic dialogue. It highlights the difference between spoken and written language, helping you craft dialogue that sounds authentic while still serving your narrative needs.
Both exercises not only help in cleaning up and improving dialogue but also deepen your understanding of how dialogue functions as a tool for character development and story progression. By regularly practicing these exercises, beginning authors can enhance their ability to write dialogue that truly resonates with readers.
9. Theme, Tone, Mood, and All That Jazz
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Theme, Tone, Mood, and All That Jazz
Theme
The discussion of“theme” in the context of the cozy mystery often refers to two different things.
The unique hook or concept of a cozy—for example, three former nuns now run Guiding Light Consultancy where they offer help and advice to those in need—is sometimes referred to as its “theme.”
I’m not saying that’s wrong, but in our discussion of theme, we’re considering the underlying message, insight, or perspective about life and human nature that your cozy mystery novel conveys.
Theme is the central idea or concept that runs throughout a narrative, providing depth and meaning beyond the surface plot and character actions. The conscious and clever use of theme is one of those elements that sets your work apart from everyone else’s.
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