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While several of these conflicts can—and should—appear in one book, you do not need every conflict to pop up in every book. Pick and choose. Mix up the challenges your protagonist will face in each installment.

Just remember that the resolution of these conflicts should lead to personal growth for the sleuth, a deeper understanding of human nature for the reader, and the restoration of harmony in the sleuth’s community.

Using the made-up character (yes, I know all characters are made up) of a gay antiques dealer by the name of Robin living in the New England village of Witches Bridge, MA, let’s consider scenarios for potential conflict within a cozy mystery.

1. Character vs. Society

Robin stumbles upon a hidden piece of art rumored to be cursed, which he decides to display in his shop. The village is abuzz with whispers and warnings, as many believe the piece brings misfortune. Robin, initially skeptical, faces ostracism from the superstitious community. He must navigate the fine line between respecting local beliefs and proving there’s a logical explanation behind the so-called curse, all while uncovering the real story behind the artwork.

2. Character vs. Character

During an annual antique fair in Witches Bridge, a rival dealer accuses Robin of selling counterfeit antiques. The accusation threatens Robin’s reputation and his cherished relationships within the village. To clear his name, Robin needs to solve the mystery of the alleged counterfeit item, a journey that pits him directly against his accuser. This conflict delves into themes of professional jealousy, the value of reputation, and the lengths to which people will go to protect what they hold dear.

3. Character vs. Self

After purchasing a collection from an estate sale, Robin discovers a diary hidden within a secret compartment of an antique desk. The diary contains sensitive information that could ruin the reputation of a prominent Witches Bridge family. Robin is torn between his desire for historical preservation and his ethical duty to protect privacy. This internal struggle tests his principles and forces him to decide what kind of man he wants to be, highlighting his growth and the personal cost of uncovering secrets.

4. Character vs. Nature

A severe winter storm hits Witches Bridge, isolating the village from the outside world. During the blackout, a valuable antique goes missing from Robin’s shop. With no way to call for outside help and the snow preventing anyone from leaving or entering the village, Robin must rely on his own resourcefulness and the help of his neighbors to find the thief. The storm’s relentless force brings the community together, showcasing the resilience of Robin and the villagers, as well as the strength found in unity.

5. Character vs. Technology

Robin introduces an online auction as a modern twist to his antique business, but the launch is marred by a cyberattack that not only shuts down the auction but also leaks his clients’ private information. Accusations fly, and trust in Robin wanes. He has to delve into the digital world, a place in which he’s not entirely comfortable, to track down the hacker. Along the way, he learns about the vulnerabilities and strengths of embracing new technologies, balancing his love for the old with the realities of the modern world.

Each scenario presents Robin with unique challenges, pushing him to solve mysteries that not only involve external puzzles but also require him to reflect on his values, relationships, and place within the community of Witches Bridge. These conflicts enrich the cozy mystery narrative, making Robin’s adventures in antique dealing as much about personal growth and community as they are about solving crimes.

When it comes to making trouble for our protagonist, we have so many terrific options for creating conflicts that feel organic rather than manufactured.

1. Develop Rich Characters with Hidden Depths

Create Complex Characters:Even in a cozy setting, characters should have secrets, desires, and fears that can lead to internal or interpersonal conflicts. A well-loved community member might have a hidden past, or a seemingly happy couple might have unseen tensions.

Use Relationships:Relationships are fertile ground for conflict. Rivalries, old grudges, or misunderstandings among characters can provide ongoing sources of tension that propel the plot and add depth.

2. Incorporate Community Dynamics

Small-Town Secrets:The close-knit nature of cozy mystery settings is perfect for brewing conflict. The history and dynamics of a small community can be a rich source of conflict as past incidents and local gossip come to light.

Community Roles:The protagonist’s role in the community (such as a bookstore owner, librarian, or café owner) can naturally lead to conflicts with other community members, be it through competition, community projects, or local politics.

3. Use the Setting as a Character

Atmospheric Tension:The setting of your cozy mystery can add layers of conflict. An impending storm, a power outage in a critical moment, or a local festival can all serve as backdrops that heighten the tension.

Setting-Related Conflicts:Conflicts arising from the setting itself, such as disputes over land, historical buildings, or community traditions, can provide a continuous thread of tension throughout your story.

4. Weave in Subplots

Subplots as Conflict Sources:Subplots involving secondary characters can introduce conflicts that intersect with or run parallel to the main mystery. These can add complexity to the story and provide opportunities for character development.

Romantic Tension:A romantic subplot can offer a different kind of conflict, especially if the course of true love does not run smooth—which, frankly, it never should. In fiction, I mean. The balance between romantic developments and the main mystery plot can keep readers engaged.

5. Employ Misdirection and Red Herrings

Clues and False Leads:Skillfully placed clues and red herrings can create conflict by leading the protagonist and the reader astray. Our sleuth and her helpers can hold opposing views on what these clues mean, who they really implicate. The challenge of deciphering which clues are genuine adds an intellectual conflict to the mix.

Character Misdirection:Characters who are not what they seem can introduce conflict. A trustworthy friend might hide a secret agenda, or a suspected antagonist could turn out to be an ally.